A great Piktochart, Jakib. I'm stoked I get to teach you this year and I love that you're so into the NRL. What team do you support? I think you've had a brilliant start to the year and know you'll learn HEAPS in English :)
I really liked your explanation about how you have big dreams. This reminds me of my imagination. To make your work even better, you could use different colours for the background instead of using green and that faded purple.
Hey Jakib,I really like what your goals are and that you wan't to be a professional Nrl player I think you will do really well.Next time you should change the backround darker,but I love it,I wish you all the best!!
A great Piktochart, Jakib. I'm stoked I get to teach you this year and I love that you're so into the NRL. What team do you support? I think you've had a brilliant start to the year and know you'll learn HEAPS in English :)
ReplyDeleteThank's i am really happy i got to be in your class,And i support the Eels
DeleteI really liked your explanation about how you have big dreams.
ReplyDeleteThis reminds me of my imagination.
To make your work even better, you could use different colours for the background instead of using green and that faded purple.
Thank you and i will next time
DeleteI really like the way you described your goals and stuff, and i like how you told us your favourite tingz, and more.
ReplyDeleteThank's for the feedback mate
DeleteGood work i liked all of the colors and stuff.
ReplyDeletegood work jakib, really liked the colours but next time maybe you should make it darker for us to read
ReplyDeleteThank's Toko
DeleteHey Jakib,I really like what your goals are and that you wan't to be a professional Nrl player I think you will do really well.Next time you should change the backround darker,but I love it,I wish you all the best!!
ReplyDeleteGood Work the design on your piktochart was really good!
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