persausive writing

movies are better then books

movies
-are more interesting
-takes less time then to read a book

Books and movies are both good ut i think movies are better ecause they don't take that long to watch the whole thing where as books take 1 week to read if you read fast

i agree that movies are better then books because they are more interesting then sitting down and reading a book because you don't have to do the work and read you just have to watch and you will see the story that they are telling in 1-2 hours instead of reading for a long time and there are more secens and stuff for kids to watch where as you can get a diffrent picture if you read a book with your mind and you could imagen the diffrence when someone is explaing in the book.

Movies are better then books because they are quicker then reading a book you can watch a movie that has been made from a book into a movie in 1-2 hours or more depinding on how long the movie is but this is way quicker then having to read a book that can take for more then 1 week the kids would like movies better and it is easier to fall asleep to somthing that doesn't take as long to read .

Movies are a great way to spend time with other use can all go  out or put a movie on at your hosue and you don't need much dvds cuz now they are on everyday tv people are showing movies on free tv so that familys and people can more and more aceses through sites like netflix and you can watch all thoese with your friends/familys

Persausive Writting Team sports are better than individual sports

Team sports are better than individual sports

I agree that team sports are better than individual sports  because you can have fun with mates, when people get tired you can share the workload and it's better getting to play with people later on when you where younger might play against 

I personally think team sport is better than individual sports because you get to play and have fun with your mates and you get to meet new people through team sports and they could be a mate for the rest of your life whereas if you play individual sports you would only get to meet the opponent you are vs for that game.

In team sports when people get tired you can make a sub for them and others can shear the workload throughout your team use can play different roles in the team Eg:Coach, Captain, Fowrads, Backs and the subs these are all the people that are willing to play hard for one and other and work towards coming away with a win in team sports in individual sport you don't have any subs it just you by yourself working hard and when you get tired you have to work even harder cuz you don't have any teammates to help you.

If you make a representative team for team sports you will get to play against the best people you vs in the same team as you and this could be really good for people to learn and get to meet others and use can all learn from one another. if you play representative individual sports use might get put into your city team for the best individual  sports and you might play as a team but do 1 vs 1  and the team with the best score at the end will win  

I agree that team sports are better than individual sports  because you can have fun with mates, when people get tired you can share the workload and it's better getting to play with people later on when you where younger might play against but if you good at individual sport then you should go and keep doing what use are good at 

Persuasive writting

The south island is better than the north island?

South island

• Sport 
• Fewer people
• Worse roads

North island

• Sport
• More people
•  Better roads

In New Zealand, there are two different parts of it the South island, And the North island they are both really good at sport and one has a bigger population than the other and better roads.

Sports in New Zealand we are strong in Rugby, League, Netball, Cycling, Etc we have but if you live in the south island there is only professional rugby down here and if you want to be an NRL player you would have to move up North but most people are leaving to play rugby because there are more opportunities then league because there aren't as many options .

In New Zealand there are more people in the north island than in the south island because it is colder than up in the north island because people in the south are closer to Antartica  and people that live up in the north are closer to the Pacific and they will get most of the warm days and they get really bad rain up there because there are closer to the Pacific and they get the stuff that comes from the pacific first

Roads there are new roads getting made in new Zealand joining the highways form many different angles but most of the roads in the south island are damaged from earthquakes and landslides or they have just been used to much compared to the like of the roads in the north island all of the roads are basically smooth because they are new or they haven't been there for long

In New Zealand, there are two different parts of it the South island, And the North island they are both really good at sport and one has a bigger population than the other and better roads and still, both islands are really special in there own ways and they both have really have produced amazing athletes and ambassadors

Persuasive writing

All zoo animals should be realised to their natural habitat

Points for:

They would get to live with more of there own animals

They would have to be in a certain area 

They would be happier 

Points against:

They are used to getting fed at a certain time

They are used to seeing people coming to see them 

They would be more vulnerable

I think animals should not get put into there natural habitat because they are used to a certain routine like getting fed at a certain time and they wouldn't know what it is really like out in the open because they have been in a certain space in a zoo for most of there life because they mother might off been in the zoo 

Animals that are brought to another country should be alright to go back to there natural habitat like lions, Tigers, Penguins would be alright to go back to there natural habitat because they lived in there once when they were born or their parents were born they would like it in there own natural habitat because they would be able to swim, run, walk as far as they wanted to but in zoos they have only a little bit of what they would have if they were still in the open.

In the wild, they would face different challenges then what they do in the zoo they would have to go and hunt for there own food and find somewhere to get a drink, they would also have t be careful not to get killed from people that are trophy hunting /People trying to cut off the horns of rhinos 

  

Season similes

Spring looks like Blossoms 

Spring tastes like Fruit and honey

Spring smells like Daffodils

Spring feels like Warm Sun

Spring sounds like Birds chirping 

Summer looks like Having a swim in the sea 

Summer tastes like Bbq 

Summer smells like Gas or wet washing 

Summer feels like Warm air

Summer sounds like Splashing and loud music  

Autumn looks like Leaves Fall off the tree

Autumn tastes like  Like air

Autumn smells like fresh water 

Autumn feels like leaves leaves 

Autumn sounds like  Leaves Fall off the tree 

Winter looks like Kids out on a sports field 

Winter tastes like Mud

Winter smells like Sweaty sports kids 

Winter feels like Cold and damp

Winter sounds like Whistle and people yelling/Cheering their kids on

WTE Sentences

L.o: identifying WTE sentences to improve our writing.

Simple Sentence: Hornby's move to the new building is to help students new learning way's. 

Very short Sentence: Hornby is moving to Nga Kahui.  

Power Sentence: Hornby's move will be good for everyone to be in the new Nga Kahui.

Red, White and Blue Sentence: It will be hard because people won't be respectful, obedient, and quiet.

The Adverb Start:  Importantly, we will be able to see others learning. 

Begin with a Preposition:  In these buildings, Hornby students will be able to write on the tables.
The -Ing start:  Deciding which class has what seating will be hard.
The -Ed start:  Determined to push for creative excellence.
The semi-colon:  Her entry was a dramatic start to the play, her exit came far too soon.
The em-dash:  Playing polo-nice for some-is a favorite pastime in upper Bulgaria.
The w-start While we were watching the experiment the paper ignited.

Persasive writing

Drugs should be allowed in sport?

Points for :
This would lead to not so many players getting kicked out of[ sport for doing drugs.
When there is a world cup they wouldn't have to have someone with them all the time to watch them and see if they are hiding anything because drugs would be legal

Points against:
There would be more people that would start doing drugs
People should be responsible for what they are doing
If you do drugs you should face the consequence

I think drugs shouldn't be allowed because then some of the players will do them before or after a game like steroids would help them be hyperactive and get more mussels and become bigger then what they were before they started doing them in the first place. Drugs are one of the most addicting things so once you start doing drugs it is gonna be very hard for you to stop doing them and if you play sports and you are stressed you will do it more when you are playing in a big game or you got dropped  from the team you could get kicked out of the comp for using drugs